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Keep up the great work!
Three things stuck out....more attention to the narrative ( most of them had interaction with children ), dramatic use of light, and greater attention to the environment.
I actually did spend quite a bit of time concepting the creature. Thank you there! I unfortunately didnt spend any time on the story setting, and after honestly looking at the other two. I could have pushed them more.
Still, I learned quite a bit and with all the best intentions. I hope the best is yet to come!
I fully intend to redo this one.
Just make sure the closet door is closed. He hasnt figured out how to use a door knob yet.
"They all float down heeere..." eew *shiver*